"Lunch hour."

"(Priscilla's birthday.)"

"Friday midnight—". Assigned date is Friday just before midnight.

"Saturday early."

"Later."

"Morning."

"Monday morning". Dated by BR.

OM is torn between going away with BR or staying with Philip and Julian (her daughter). There would be pain involved if she and BR should decide to part, and she writes again of the possibility of meeting (but where—Haslemere?).

BR is "impatient but you know yourself and must not buck your character by being false to what you feel right." She asks again: "tell me about Alys".

OM will see the Whiteheads—she doesn't think Mrs. Whitehead likes her.

The original letter is still extant, document .200804d, record 116391. The text varies greatly from this typescript.

There is also an original letter written on this day, document .200804e, record 116392. It is very brief.

"—and this time tomorrow I'll be in your arms."

"(Undated.)"

"(Postmarked 17 August, 17.)"

There is a literary letter with the same date but no text matches: document .052359, record 99813.

There is a literary version of this letter with some similar text: document .052361, record 99817.

There is literary version of this letter, with language similar to this letter, p. 126: document .052359, record 99813. It however is dated two days earlier, 17 August 1917.

A literary letter was typed using this date; the text is completely different. Document .052362, record 99818.

"Friday."

"Evening."

There is no "1: 131". No pages are missing, so the number was skipped. The text of the letter is not related in any way to literary letter no. 23, document .007052fc, record 93470.

"Evening."

"Saturday—".

"Friday—".

There is literary version of this letter, document .052367, record 99826. It, however, is dated earlier, 24 September 1917.

A literary version was prepared which bears some similarity to this letter: document .052368, record 99827, dated 25 September 1917.

This letter contains the line "I've looked down eternity with you." This is very similar to literary letter no. 23, document .007052fc, record 93470, dated 26 September 1917. Other lines in this letter match, e.g. "You will put the crown on your work."

"Evening."

The last sentence of this letter has been re-worked to create a literary letter, document .052369, record 99828.

There is a literary letter with the same date, document .052371, record 99830. There are, however, no text matches, apart from the fact that both are written "In the train".

"Later."

"[Postmarked 16th]".

"Monday evening."