Schoenman raises concerns on the nature of Creasey's draft letter: "We are rather apprehensive about the plan to involve many people in a programme of 'improving the image' of Lord Russell and the Foundation." "... only widespread acquaintance with the facts of which Lord Russell speaks will give people an adequate idea of what he hopes to achieve, and apologetics or explanations as to his motives place one in an awkward and unbecoming posture."

Schoenman adds that he will contact BR's publisher about sending Creasey the books he should have received.