Gollancz has revised the draft with amendments from Gilbert Murray who has been "extremely enthusiastic". The only major change is the omission of "unification", as "it would be better to say nothing about that topic." Murray believes that the best way to publicize the letter is to have it signed by BR, Murray, Gollancz, and if possible Halifax or Templewood "for the Tories". Gollancz will not contact the latter two until he hears from BR. The three-page draft is enclosed, as well as a copy of a letter to Murray from Gollancz.